So after a few years, things have come full circle - Phoe's in a guild and city again, and has regained a lot of old qualities she had way back near when I first began playing her. Been meaning to get out and interact with more people, but for those of you I have interacted with lately, however brief the interaction was, I'd like to know what you guys think.
And before anyone complains about how long it takes for me to emote, I get easily distracted, so I get up and walk around a lot. Just kind of an excuse/explanation for that. >.>
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As somebody that roleplays with you often, and like I posted last time. You are amazing, I don't even mind the waiting for emotes, because they're always awesome, great imagery and very narrative. I've been trying to copy you lately, and I find myself often going..Ooh..she did emote (blah blah) to precede..I'm gonna do that too..no wait..have to do that after she does one not like that.. It's weird, and I'm neurotic. Also love that you're keeping up with the memory loss thing in little quirks, because I forget about it, and then Phoe reacts in such a way that brings it back to mind.
As for the player, you already know I like your whimsical writing style.
Now if I could just figure out when she's flirting and when she's not, life would be so much easier...
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So I'm at a bit of a crossroads and wondering what to change about my RP, if anything, and what to keep the same since I'm kind of worried about her lapsing back into her old, bitter, grumpy self - especially lately. Regardless of how short or long the interaction or the nature of the interaction, I wanna hear feedback.
Also, any critiques on my emoting (aside from my emote speed; yes, I know I'm still slow >_>) in addition to feedback on RP is appreciated.
It's been a while, and I think I've gotten to interact with some new people in that time. Just curious to see how I'm doing.
Now if only Phoe had a "steam release" valve someone could press when she gets pissed... >.> Just saying
And yeah, I've noticed the little undercurrents of hostility and tension whenever they talk, and it's kind of funny. Sometimes I half expect them to snap and start strangling each other or pulling hair. They might become friends at some point, but it'll probably take a long time.
And it does feel like they do have some semi-genuine moments, but at the same time, they'd probably still be more than happy to stab each other in the back if the opportunity came up. Either way, I've been having fun now that Phoe finally has a rival.
Really, by having no obligation to talk to each other beyond the friendship they formed in the right place at the right time, Kodie's learned more about who she is and who she wants to be from talking with Phoenecia than she has by doing anything else. Even when Phoe says something she disagrees with, it only sharpens and confirms her own feelings, while at the same time allowing her to practice her tolerance.
Kodaza asked for her job at the Rose to give her a place to practice virtue, to learn humility through doing meager chores and refusing to be paid. It hasn't worked out that way at all, as it turns out! But by Phoenecia giving her chances to trust, learn, and respect, Kodie feels like she's growing in her faith all the same. If she ever finds success later in life after becoming more mature, she'll always think of Phoe as a driving influence behind that.
Sorry for the mini-essay, but there's a lot to work with!
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Omei offers you a quick wink.
I think that's the best way to put her, too. To him, she's an unknown variable, whose value is constantly changing. She's a pattern unto herself, something to be observed as much as it is something to sink his (Metaphorical) teeth into and try and decipher in that way only he goes about things. She's absolutely brilliant in creating these moments where she reveals just how similar she is (Or, in most cases, was) to him, putting him sometimes at ease, other times on his toes or on edge. Sometimes she borders on mothering or placating, and he doesn't know how to respond to that either, since, yes, she's far older than him, and yet she has such a youthful air about her.
He has a strong fondness for her, though he's still trying to figure her out. There are moments where he'd like nothing more than to tear his own hair out because of her, and others where he's glad he can turn to her for any number of reasons.
In short, she's multi-faceted, fluid, sometimes duplicitous, and all around fascinating. *thumbsup!*
More interaction in the future, provided it's legitimate in it's prompt and basis, would be worth engaging upon.
Thanks for the RP.
Phoenecia is great! I was pleasantly surprised with how she's become a crucial part of Haven's support system over the years. She's always been there for him in her own weird way. Even when they were at odds and didn't get along. There was always this underlying measure of respect.
Your writing has changed a lot though since I was last around. I don't see the whimsical style in your writing so much any more. Not that it's a bad thing. You've always had a kind of "less is more" approach but this time I feel like there's an added emphasis on precision. I'm not sure if I'm properly describing it but I still enjoy it regardless.
You've always been good fun to roleplay with be it for idle conversation or otherwise. I think Rivas described you best above and I'm hoping my project I've got planned for our characters takes off and gives us an opportunity to RP more together.
Do you hear that?
It feels good, it feels good because I am both the slave and the ruler of my own body and I wish to do with it exactly as I please
If I might be so bold, I would absolutely love to have more interactions with Phoenecia in the future. My only hesitation comes from the the three experiences that we have had thus far; all of them somehow turning into an OOC discussion where I strongly believe it was not needed. I would love to continue writing these great little scenes with your involvement, without that shift away from the actual roleplay.
Kudos to you!
Sryaen really likes Phoenecia. I hadn't really expected them to hit it off so quickly, but I'm really pleasantly surprised at how their relationship has progressed. Phoe is so easy to RP with. She's very down-to-earth and interacting with her seems as normal as chatting with an old friend that you haven't seen in a few years but you don't skip a beat and pick up right where you left off. So it has a very authentic and normal feel to it. Phoe has been a strong presence in Sry's new life path and was really one of the only people who reached out to interact with him when he switched sides (again).
Phoenecia is like, the epitome of a self-made woman. She's been in and out of guilds and orgs on the Spirit side, but has no problem living her own life and just chugging along even if she doesn't necessarily have a home within a city or a guild. She's industrious. Talk about being a larger than life shopkeeper and crafter, wow. I am seriously impressed at the range of talents that Phoenecia has at her disposal. She's accomplished and amassed a fortune in her shrewd business dealings, but she isn't one to rest on her laurels. She's ALWAYS doing something, tackling the next project and staying busy. And what I find to be Phoe's best trait is that no matter how busy she may be with anything, she will always make time for someone new to interact with and go out of her way to do small gestures to show that she'd like to continue engaging. Phoe is definitely a giver and when she cares for someone, she really feels with her whole being.
So far, Sry has really only seen the cheerful, friendly and bubbly side of Phoe. But I would really like to see if there's more beneath the surface, maybe some skeletons in her closet. I have a feeling Sryaen wouldn't flinch at the idea of finding out Phoe has some darkness of her own that she tucks away. Hell, he might come to like Phoe even more because of it.
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