Worst Descriptions Ever 2: Golden Dragon Milk Strikes Again

SeirSeir Seein' All the ThingsGetting high off your emotionMember Posts: 972 ✭✭✭✭✭
Previous forums had this.

This is basically a repository of some of the most horrifying or hilarious descriptions that you've seen on a person. I'm going to start with the poster child of bad descriptions everywhere. As a note, this description is from Lusternia but is still the poster child for the rest of IRE.

She is a fierce dracnari and the effects of the Taint are readily seen in her form. The illegitimate child of a Dracnari lord and her human mother, Princess Lyra of the Moon, she exhibits traits of both races. Her entire body is encrusted in shimmering emerald green scales, excepting her two breasts, pale as the moon and unblemished like virgin snow. Innocently left uncovered, they are her sole pride, as they connect her to her mother and the human race. Upon the slightest movement of her shapely torso, thin, trickling rivulets of golden dragon milk issue forth from the dainty, coral red nipples, imparting upon her the fragrance of divine ambrosia. A pair of colossal wings sprout from between her shoulder blades. Encased in silver and steel, these wings appear to be able to withstand large impacts. Ancient runes and symbols are inscribed in gold upon the metallic surfaces. While in combat, these wings can be angled to reflect and concentrate beams of moonlight, briefly stunning the viewer. A diminutive pair of wings left uncoated emerge from the small of her back. Just below them extends a slender tail, constantly flicking back and forth like the tongue of a serpent. A daughter of the Taint, her body is imperfect and covered in scales like a snake, the incarnation of evil. Growing up in the influence of the Taint, she has known no other way of life. Lyra, deserted by her lord and soon afterwards bereft of her child, died in agonizing despair. However, she must have imparted to her daughter more than a fair share of her goodness, for Laterne's eyes shine with an inner peace.
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  • TeaniTeani Evening Sky SwedenMember Posts: 1,854 ✭✭✭✭✭
    I don't even.. Just... O M G, my eyes!



  • AngweAngwe I'm the dog that ate yr birthday cake Bedford, VAMember Posts: 978 ✭✭✭✭✭
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    EmelleLin
  • KonnornKonnorn Member Posts: 263 ✭✭✭✭
    That was scary... True, I've seen some scary descs in Aetolia, but nothing even comes close to that.

     

    Alastair
  • SeirSeir Seein' All the Things Getting high off your emotionMember Posts: 972 ✭✭✭✭✭
    Rumor has it that it was a @Lin alt.
    HadoryuEmellePiperCalipso
  • EmelleEmelle the Seer Seer's WoodMember Posts: 711 ✭✭✭✭✭
    Just the other day I was wondering why this thread hadn't been reestablished on newforum. I think it was after reading the "don't need no man" newbie desc.

    (for the love of humanity, will someone please get that post up in here)
  • LinLin SMASHER/DEVOURER MASCHINEKLASTMember Posts: 1,560 mod
    edited March 2013
    That wasn't me you piece of three course turkey dinner with dessert.
    PiperSeirEmelle
  • PiperPiper Master Crumbs Member Posts: 715 ✭✭✭✭✭
    I'm liking that for the edit. Now I'm hungry, and I hate you for it.
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    LinAryanne
  • MeskhenetMeskhenet Member Posts: 154 ✭✭✭
    Nola said:
    From Xavin's post in Quotes and Misquotes, at Emelle's request, I present:

    Look laquanda

    She is a typical Human and is a strong, independent black woman and she don't need no man.


    I am totally responsible for this.
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  • EmelleEmelle the Seer Seer's WoodMember Posts: 711 ✭✭✭✭✭
    edited March 2013
    She is a typical Human a lovely lady, standing at about 5'10 a light creme color with only the slightest hints of a tanned physique. her sleek curvy form flows like a beautiful hourglass. An soft pious face sits atop her slim neck. Her hair tied up in a single bun with only a set of long black bangs left unchecked to frame her face. Sleek, thin eyebrows draw attention to the two glowing lush green eyes as they gaze about with an appraising gaze. A soft quint nose flows lower leading two her soft pouty lips. A tender neck and pious shoulders flow lower into a busty womans chest. Sleek lines rolling down the girls trim stomach and flaring out into wide hips. Once more siphoning down into long lively legs and supple feet. She is wearing:
    tan canvas and glass high-heeled shoes
    a white silk backless dress
    :(
    LinAryanneNia
  • AarbrokAarbrok Breaking things...For Science Portland, OregonMember Posts: 1,405 ✭✭✭✭✭
    edited April 2013
    My boobs are fantastic.
    That is all.

    And...I have a big flaw.....its in a jar.

    Kallah
  • RizialRizial Member Posts: 5
    Oh yeah Aarbrok? My flaw is bigger! -neener-
  • MereliiMerelii Reno, NV DesertFTWMember Posts: 21 ✭✭
    It's not the size of your flaw, it's how you use it, don'cha know. :3
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    StathanAlastair
  • OrisaeOrisae Member Posts: 239 ✭✭✭✭
    That desc is amazing.
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    NolaPerilunaAryanne
  • TozToz Member Posts: 2,153 ✭✭✭✭✭
    Lost it at the ending. The mental image of him soaring away every time someone looks at him...
    (Oasis): Azzello says, "I'll still never forget the first time I saw Toz throwing hammers."
    (Oasis): Azzello says, "I freaked out and thought they had somehow managed to pull me into them."
    (Oasis): Azzello says, "So I tumbled away from my team and into theirs."


    PerilunaEzalorTzaAlice
  • SeirSeir Seein' All the Things Getting high off your emotionMember Posts: 972 ✭✭✭✭✭
    Fly hiiiiiigh.

    High into the skyyyyyyy.
  • AngweAngwe I'm the dog that ate yr birthday cake Bedford, VAMember Posts: 978 ✭✭✭✭✭
    There's SO much wrong with that description. It's like being hit by Kenshiro, no time to recover.

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    Ivoln
  • AngweAngwe I'm the dog that ate yr birthday cake Bedford, VAMember Posts: 978 ✭✭✭✭✭
    He is a clever Xoran and is also part Atavian. This strange mixture of bloodlines gives him the distinctive features of both races, the Xorani tail, and a pair Atavian wings. It also gives him a slight human appearance. Instead  of being covered by a Xoran's protective scales, he is fair skinned like any  human, the only place where the scales are in appearance are on his tail, giving it a slight gray tint along with a snakish texture. His face is well sculpted  with harsh, sharp lines accentuating his cheekbones, and the soft almond shape of his eyes, and his long aristocratic nose. The soft golden glow  of his eyes is set off only by the slight silver and sapphire blue flecks of  color spiraling out from his pupil. Hair the color of deepest midnight falls  around his head in a cascade of shadows, his bangs falling rakishly into his  face, while the mass of his hair is tied back in a leather thong. Behind him crimson stained wings sprout from his broad, powerful shoulders, each feather shimmering the soft color of a ruby as it catches a bit of light. He stands at 6 feet 2 inches tall. He walks with the blessing of Niuri.
    He is wearing:
    a silver chain-linked onyx necklace, around the neck
    loose-fitting gi pants of vibrant teal, worn on the legs
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    Tza
  • TzaTza Member Posts: 126 ✭✭✭
    @Emelle: Disagree. I find that desc great. :D

    I'm just not sure what I like best: Misinterpreting 'leather thong' on the first skim-read (though considering the rest of the desc I'm not surprised), the fact that he forgot to mention his imp-horkval-grecht-troll grandparents or the blessing of Niuri at the very end.
    Alice
  • ArbreArbre Arbrelina Jolie Member, Guildmaster Posts: 1,999 mod
    To be fair to Niuri, it's probably an org blessing.
  • TzaTza Member Posts: 126 ✭✭✭
    Arbre said:
    To be fair to Niuri, it's probably an org blessing.
    I know. I still found it ironically fitting. ;)
  • ArekaAreka Drifting in a sea of wenches' bosomsMember, Guildmaster Posts: 1,693 ✭✭✭✭✭
    edited October 2013
    He is a clever Mhun though is visibly of Orcish descent as well. The Half-Orc stands a few inches under eight feet in height. He is immensely broad in shoulder and in essentially the rest of his heavily muscled frame. Shining out from behind a tangled mass of wavy black and violet hair, his remarkably vibrant eyes are striking in the fact his irises are comprised of three rings of color an outer black, a middle white and finally a royal purple that hugs his narrow pupils. His leathery skin is mottled with patches of pale ashen grey and dark green. His face is handsome in a rogue-like way, though his brow is a bit heavy. His bottom eye teeth are tusk-like protruding a small way out of his mouth. His fingers are tipped with sharp black claws. On his upper left shoulder is a brand resembling two crossed mining picks.

    Three feet taller than both of the races that spawned it and with endgame eyes: as I am told is a current meme - such wow. 
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    AryanneIvolnAlice
  • IvolnIvoln Azvosh RakarMember, Immortal Posts: 111 Immortal
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