I'm so happy with where Angwe and Emelle's relationship has ended up and the way their interactions are going lately. The whole rejection awkwardness was absurdly fun, but I worried that it was going to estrange them and I'm so glad it hasn't.
@Lydiatha: I think yours looks pretty good! I've made a few style suggestions below, most of which I think would help make your description more direct. That …
@Alastair: Your writing is descriptive and vivid; personally, I wouldn't change much about the way you've described him and his features. I do have a couple of mor…
I got an interview. A real-deal, they're-flying-me-halfway-across-the-country-for-an-onsite-visit, big-girl-pants interview for the job that almost seems too perfect to be real! Now I just have to make it to the end of the month...
Nice log! I also noticed the issue with tenses. Text-based games can be a strange medium for that because they're written like a novel (past-tense convention) but in real time (present-tense convention). I see present tense done more and it's my per…
@Eleanor: Thank you, thank you! Re: personal pronouns, this is a quirk I've sort of fallen into with Emelle, both IG and in these entries. I think it's equally pres…
Agreeing with @Seir. As someone who was completely alienated from the game a few years ago because of some "corrupt" BS that went down in Bloodloch, I can also attest …
Oh god, okay, let me see if I can get everybody who I've been following so far. If I've left you out, it's not because I'm ignoring you, it's because I want to read more of your writing before I respond.
Yeah...I'm sure it's different for everyone. While I like making friends with (some) people OOCly, I find that being too involved in OOC clans and stuff takes away from my immersion. I think it's good for newbies that we encourage them to seek out t…
@Fenrir: Don't rage about that! You're taking steps to help improve your quality of life, and that's something to be happy about. Good luck in MAD 2: MADDEN'S MADDENING.Comment by EmelleApril 2013
I believe Kimbra needs to be reintroduced on newforums. I will resist the urge to link to her entire discography and choose only three.