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Naos has been around for a little while now, making all the friends, and I would love to hear if anyone has any feedback for me. Playing a character like Naos is a first for me, so good or bad, let me have it.
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It's got me intrigued enough to want to RP at you again and see what might pop out of it, see if Naos is all swagger or not.
To be real honest with you, Naos wasn't someone that was in Elene's sight to approach, until she was instructed to sharpen her skills on him. What that led up to was definitely something I did not expect, and the way it has developed and defined the character so much was an early highlight to Elene's return to Corruption's embrace.
I think it's incredibly bold for you to play Naos the way that you do. His personality grates anyone the wrong way, especially how narcissistic he comes across, and the sexism he seems to exude when interacting with females would make me want to beat him up in real life. However, at the rate things keep going, it feels more and more like Naos and Elene are intrinsically tied in their personal descent down the Spiral and I, for one, can't wait to explore more.
Keep on keeping on, sacrilegious bastard!
For the most part, it seems like it is. Thanks to all of you for the feedback, and thanks to @Aros in particular for adding in something I can work on. Because you're right, the very brief scene Naos stepped into was most definitely not my finest work, and I need to make an active attempt towards expanding on the feelings that Naos exuded.
He has been a strong influence on her, whether she likes it or not, and some of it was definitely positive. You've also revealed enough about Naos for someone like Galilei to be ambivalent about him, even after all that's happened. Which says a lot about pacing on your end, and little details - big, big kudos. Things aren't exactly resolved between them, but we can see how that goes!
The encounters have been very few but each time I was nearly on the verge of dozing off and you made me sit up straight and wake up. I don't know too much of Naos' motivations, but I look forward to spyi-- err.. getting to know more about him in the future.
All that said, I love how absolutely rock-solid your emotes are. They're well thought out and worded in such a way that Naos' actions flow so naturally that it pushes me harder to work on my own emotes.
One of these days, Sry isn't going to be this old man re-adjusting to the world and will be back in fighting form. And I am beyond stoked for the day that RP happens because I'm sure there will be more destruction than just a table and chair getting tossed around.
Much love, brother. Keep doing what you're doing.
Tell me how I'm doing!
The thing I enjoy most about Naos, is he just doesn't give a fuck. I have said many times how much I loathe the fact that in a fantasy world there are so many real-life comparisons of things that upset people and in turn we limit ourselves to be this safe version of everything. Now I do not want to discount atrocities that happen in real life, but also, there should be a realization that a player acknowledges some of these horrible things, but is not existing as these things as a player....its a roleplaying game. Ultimately if someone wants to be a vile character, then so be it....but Naos, does it with such an impeccable flair, magnificently worded emotes, and absolutely fantastic environment/mood setting in his story.
You really just want to pop him in the face, but that....is also part of his charm, honestly.
I love what you have developed, and I hope that one day others can embody the complexities your character does. Little piece of shit that he is.