While I am interested in what people think of my character (both good and bad), what I'm primarily interested in are critiques of my writing. I want to become a stronger writer and story teller so anything that can help me in that regard is very much appreciated.
Flame/Critique/Praise/Whatever you do best. Have at!
¤ Si vis pacem, para bellum. ¤
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